my new sprites (goku ssj 4)

[RiceZilla]

Just because he doesn't know anything about Spriting..
Doesn't mean he can't give feedback.

But "It does look pretty crap" Without saying why is kind of rude.

You say rude stuff all the time! Silly boy! Now get back on topic everyone! Pretend I never said the "crap" comment. I don't want to get into a flame war.

What?..I was on your side. 
You just said he looks like crap without a reason to why he looks like crap.

[SargentMugen]

Just because he doesn't know anything about Spriting..
Doesn't mean he can't give feedback.

But "It does look pretty crap" Without saying why is kind of rude.

You say rude stuff all the time! Silly boy! Now get back on topic everyone! Pretend I never said the "crap" comment. I don't want to get into a flame war.

What?..I was on your side. 
You just said he looks like crap without a reason to why he looks like crap.

Oh crap! Sorry!

[R.I.C.O - Teros]

This is a good start. Here's some suggestions.

- Don't outline the inner shading of his attire with black/dark purple. It's doesn't look right, use a lighter color.
- Don't make him smile.. that's not Akuma's style
- I know you said you couldn't get the colors right, but his hair is red you know.
- Also, use more shading in his face.

Other wise this is excellent, good job

[TÐZ]

Just because he doesn't know anything about Spriting..
Doesn't mean he can't give feedback.

But "It does look pretty crap" Without saying why is kind of rude.

You say rude stuff all the time! Silly boy! Now get back on topic everyone! Pretend I never said the "crap" comment. I don't want to get into a flame war.

What?..I was on your side. 
You just said he looks like crap without a reason to why he looks like crap.

Oh crap! Sorry!

Both of you
*face palm*

[TÐZ]

Looks good for a 1st try, I never did one. Remember practice makes perfect.

[Whoblehwah]

its  prety good for a start

[dennis872005]

This is a good start. Here's some suggestions.

- Don't outline the inner shading of his attire with black/dark purple. It's doesn't look right, use a lighter color.
- Don't make him smile.. that's not Akuma's style
- I know you said you couldn't get the colors right, but his hair is red you know.
- Also, use more shading in his face.

Other wise this is excellent, good job

ok thanks for the advice. if i can't get him to look like akuma i will just call him a shoto.

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

pretty good for your first time?

[Spidermew]

I actualy like it
It kinda looks like a young Goki.

[Darkmanx_429]

Definitely getting there but, I think you'll agree needs more work.  But something's there... he also needs to look more meancing.

[dennis872005]

put up a new sprite in first post

and here it is