Author Topic: My First try in making a character (Kl'rt MVC style) (Read 4423 times)

bdcirck · « **on:** October 04, 2008, 03:17:21 PM »

This is my first try in creating a MUGEN character(haven't added any sound yet.). For this character i used the MVC template of this site. Please give me some feedback to how to improve this character.

Klrt
http://rapidshare.com/files/170601931/KlrtSpritesheets.zip

Movelist http://rapidshare.com/files/152906538/Moves_list.txt

As requested by Apoc SCREENSHOTS:

aPoCaLyPsE · « **Reply #1 on:** October 04, 2008, 03:44:21 PM »

Any Screenshots?

-"aPoC."

bdcirck · « **Reply #2 on:** October 04, 2008, 04:01:49 PM »

Didn't think screenshots was nessesary since i added the char itself, but if you really want some screenshots then sure i can make some.

MirageAtoli · « **Reply #3 on:** October 04, 2008, 04:04:23 PM »

Quote from: bdcirck on October 04, 2008, 04:01:49 PM

Didn't think screenshots was nessesary since i added the char itself, but if you really want some screenshots then sure i can make some.

Please do.

bdcirck · « **Reply #4 on:** October 04, 2008, 04:16:33 PM »

screenshots added. See first post

ATiC3 · « **Reply #5 on:** October 04, 2008, 05:33:15 PM »

um... use imageshack or photoshop to upload images.

UltraRoboninja · « **Reply #6 on:** October 04, 2008, 05:46:27 PM »

For a first try, this is REALLY good! The sprites could use a little more detail (but I don't blame you, I'd never wanna sprite The Thing's skin,

) but all in all, it's very impressive! He's definitely got a spot in my roster, thanks man.

Here are some screens so people know who he is:

P.S. Love the Win pose

Z999 · « **Reply #7 on:** October 04, 2008, 07:17:52 PM »

Wow, unexpected ^^ I like this one, pretty solid for a first char.

Now he could become killer work with some updates on the arms (you could ask acey and warner for advices since they both did one of his arm ^^) and some fancy effects.

Hope you'll improve him, but really a good start

UltraRoboninja · « **Reply #8 on:** October 04, 2008, 07:47:18 PM »

Just gave him a good playing. He feels pretty solid and fun, but all his moves do a little too much damage. I was able to completely kill Robin by using his bouncing ball super just once! Also, he needs more intos and winposes. Maybe some intros where he starts as some other marvel characters in honor of Secret Invasion (if you want, I can send you some Ms Marvel sprites for this). Also, a more serious winpose. The one he as now is great, but he's such a menacing character, he should have more than a funny winpose.

All in all, great job. I hope you'll keep fine tuning him.

BLue BoMBeR · « **Reply #9 on:** October 04, 2008, 07:51:12 PM »

who is this Kl'rt exactly? is it a capcom or marvel?

Z999 · « **Reply #10 on:** October 04, 2008, 07:55:38 PM »

Marvel. Basically he is a skrull with fantastic four powers...

Shingokusatsu · « **Reply #11 on:** October 04, 2008, 08:39:42 PM »

Great char, your talented, and the choice of a skrull is just excellent

Your wip looks promising to

Weapon x program · « **Reply #12 on:** October 04, 2008, 09:57:50 PM »

first of all:
hello and thanks,

now the character should have the thing arm like they said ask warner and acey or my friend alucard for some help.

here is the superskrull as an helper on his thanos.
THE coding is great but the clors should be work on.
Good start and good luck.

Jelux Da Casual · « **Reply #13 on:** October 05, 2008, 02:35:17 AM »

You see, I don't see what the big deal is about the MvC template, this right here shows it works just fine. With a little fine tuning (code tweaking) and a sprite facelift, Kl'rt he is gonna be freaking awesome (cause right now he's sweet, but sweet < freaking awesome). Excellent first attempt though.

bdcirck · « **Reply #14 on:** October 05, 2008, 06:20:08 AM »

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Just gave him a good playing. He feels pretty solid and fun, but all his moves do a little too much damage. I was able to completely kill Robin by using his bouncing ball super just once!

well i have tested the bouncing ball on serveral characters and it does around 750 damage to characters with 100% def, with exception the characters that have super armor(does more damage on them). But the power cost of the bouncing ball is 2000, I could always increase the cost or lower the damage. The damage of his other attacks are a bit high, this is a choice i made because he has the strength of the thing.

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The one he as now is great, but he's such a menacing character, he should have more than a funny winpose.

Well the thing with the cow ending is that i first wanted to make an attack where he throws the first 3 skrulls to the enemy(in honor of the first appearance of the skrull). But they where too big to throw

. But i still have to see what I actually want as an intro's, win's and Lose. The idea you have with ms marvel is a good one. The idea that i had was to make an intro where he comes on the scene as a FF member to help an average Human and then that he simply incinerates that Human leaving a pile of bones behind(haven't started yet to make it but the idea is there).

ps. i also added the screenshots to the first post using imageshack

talon138 · « **Reply #15 on:** October 05, 2008, 02:32:47 PM »

i personally think its very well done for a first timer =]

dragonesku · « **Reply #16 on:** October 07, 2008, 02:45:36 AM »

Looks good man, I'll check it out and let you know what I think.

laspacho · « **Reply #17 on:** October 07, 2008, 12:15:52 PM »

Wow surprising I did not expect to be seeing/trying this character today. I just tried him out.
I think he is done well and is fun to play, that it the most important part to any character.

Here are my suggestions for him:

His arm that looks like The Thing could use some touching up. I'm sure if you ask Warner he would let you use his The Thing character as a example for his skin.
The face that appears during the hyper could use another shade but I like the picture.

The chicken in his taunt could use another shade.
The fire looks like it got stretched a little. If you would like, send me the original un stretched fire and I can try and put it through the Adobe Photoshop Blow up plugin it might come out a little better.
Maybe a second winpose of him posing and not changing? (I like the cow hehe)
He could use some sounds/voices. Maybe Abyss Form 1 and 3 sounds might be suiting?

Great job I wish you luck in working more on him in the future, and thanks for sharing.

tremainekr · « **Reply #18 on:** October 07, 2008, 09:55:34 PM »

you hosted at the right place. you will get

of help with detailing great character

tremainekr · « **Reply #19 on:** October 07, 2008, 09:57:07 PM »

all so KLIRT gets my vote to be in the EOH roster

I Can Dig It · « **Reply #20 on:** October 07, 2008, 10:32:38 PM »

nice character man, REALLY good for a first character

Jedah12 · « **Reply #21 on:** October 08, 2008, 11:33:46 PM »

Wow, The Original Super-Skrull

I'm gonna test him, thanks for share

Master Yoda · « **Reply #22 on:** October 09, 2008, 12:42:48 PM »

very nice your sprites!!! i hope this char coming soon!!!

jod job!!!

tremainekr · « **Reply #23 on:** October 09, 2008, 02:25:14 PM »

keep everything love the hypers . work on the invisibility, the reptile mk character has it. who ever made jhonny strom could help with fire armor opponent hit sparks

bdcirck · « **Reply #24 on:** October 10, 2008, 04:38:50 PM »

Thanks all for the positive comments. I want to thank UltraRoboninja for sending me some of his ms marvel sprites to use for this character, thanks mate your the best

. Also want to thank the people who offert / suggested people that could help me with the thing skin, but seeing the amount of sprites that need to be edited i will put the makking of the thing skin on hold

.

I have updaded the character and updated the download link in the first post. I have added the following Updates to the character:
- Added thanos (Cosmic Cube) Helper Hyper
- Added an MS Marvel Hyper calling cap colossus and Hulk
- Added an new intro
- Added an new winpose

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The fire looks like it got stretched a little. If you would like, send me the original un stretched fire and I can try and put it through the Adobe Photoshop Blow up plugin it might come out a little better.

Well actually i edited one of dhalsims fireball turned it around and edited and stretched it so I don't have a small copy of it.

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He could use some sounds/voices. Maybe Abyss Form 1 and 3 sounds might be suiting?

Good idea i will look into it. thanks

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