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The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« on: May 14, 2012, 12:06:14 AM »


Hey guys, It's been a while

like I said is just a maybe, I nee to know what do you think
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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #1 on: May 14, 2012, 12:27:12 AM »
I know you said it's not a WIP but for the sake of C+C, I'm gonna pretend this is going to be a WIP

His left hand seems to be very jerky and seems some transition frames between opening and closing and his shorts seem a bit lazy.

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #2 on: May 14, 2012, 12:33:42 AM »
I think he goes up and down too fast and the head seems to lack detales compared to the rest of the body.

Your base was cyclops right?

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #3 on: May 14, 2012, 01:34:51 AM »


Hey guys, It's been a while

like I said is just a maybe, I nee to know what do you think
yellow on legs is flat. shape it around the legs like the yellow bands wrapped around the characters in your sig.

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #4 on: May 14, 2012, 01:49:14 AM »
yes is cyclops, I fixed the face and I think it look better now

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #5 on: May 14, 2012, 08:08:10 AM »
Its looks very good!! Good luck on him!!!  :w00t:
 

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #6 on: May 14, 2012, 08:55:00 AM »
great man best of luck on this :w00t:
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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #7 on: May 14, 2012, 10:15:44 AM »
You still didn't seem to fix the other mistakes pointed out

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2012, 12:24:08 PM »
You still didn't seem to fix the other mistakes pointed out
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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2012, 03:13:59 PM »
You can use Vision by Slotman this will make you are work more easy %%-

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #10 on: May 14, 2012, 03:33:27 PM »
I gotta say something. is like the elephant in the room. WHY is he flying like that?  I mean the positioning of the body. ( I dont know who this character is)

PS. Nice update to the face. since you slowed down the flight the cape is choppy.

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #11 on: May 14, 2012, 05:50:59 PM »
You can use Vision by Slotman this will make you are work more easy %%-

is that vision opensource? im curious

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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #12 on: May 14, 2012, 06:52:56 PM »
Im sorry but that is NOT how visions face should look you should check the other vision that has been released and take examples from that sprite for the face
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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #13 on: May 15, 2012, 04:22:25 AM »
i agree the flying position seems UnNatural. also i suggest looking at other Vision sprites for Future Reference? i took the liberty of Looking for Vision Desings and tought it might could help you out.

By Job (Base is Urien)

By Slotman (Base is Cap)

by PrimeOp (Base is magneto i Think For the first two and the other one is cyclops not sure...)

You are using Cyclops as your base Right? i Think you probably Would be better using Magneto instead Since well he is flying character and has a cape and all as for the face you could probably use The faces of the sprite edits above for reference. (Then again you could use multiple bases and not only magneto)  ;)

Hope this helps Either way best of lucks with this project Genziroz hope you continue working on him.  :)
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Re: The Vision, not a WIP but a maybe
« Reply #14 on: May 16, 2012, 11:05:57 AM »
is that vision opensource? im curious
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