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[Saber Alter]

I am the bone of my Ring
Steel is my body, Light is my Blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Day
Nor known to Night
I have withstood Evil's might To create many weapons
Yet those powers will hold nothing
So as I pray, beware my power Unlimited Green lantern Blades

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wow you made emiya look very good.

[Spidermew]

I am the bone of my Ring
Steel is my body, Light is my Blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Day
Nor known to Night
I have withstood Evil's might To create many weapons
Yet those powers will hold nothing
So as I pray, beware my power Unlimited Green lantern Blades

Looks good, interesting take on the oath.

[Marancv]

looking out good. but try to down the contrast, and add a 3rd color between light and dark, and will look even bettah