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IMT Main => M.U.G.E.N WIP => Topic started by: warecus on June 16, 2012, 05:36:46 PM

Title: should i contiue?
Post by: warecus on June 16, 2012, 05:36:46 PM

critique welcome


it's been a while

(http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3553/phoenx.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/401/phoenx.png/)

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Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: Macaulyn97 on June 16, 2012, 06:23:09 PM

her right leg is too thick

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: trexrell44 on June 16, 2012, 07:04:00 PM

Quote from: warecus on June 16, 2012, 05:36:46 PM

critique welcome


it's been a while

(http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3553/phoenx.png) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/401/phoenx.png/)

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If you thin out the legs and and change the hair you have a winner.

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: Macaulyn97 on June 16, 2012, 08:16:20 PM

about the hair you could use Mamiya's from Hokuto No Ken

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: HyperVoiceActing on June 16, 2012, 08:25:59 PM

Something about the chest bothers me. Same for the sash around her waist

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: esn23 on June 17, 2012, 03:10:59 AM

yes besides the legs being too big the rest looks wonderful and i love your custom hair looks a lot better than some of the other stuff i have seen floating around

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: warecus on June 18, 2012, 07:33:51 PM

here we go better?

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Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: ATiC3 on June 18, 2012, 10:35:43 PM

Hair needs shading, but the rest is golden. XD

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: Twinimage on June 19, 2012, 10:45:25 AM

The original hair you had actually didn't look bad. Something not quite right about it, but it was much better than the hair in your last sprite.
Maybe if you used that hair with the face from Capcom's sprites of Jean Grey.

There are a number of people working on Phoenix. Maybe you should consider helping someone else out with theirs, rather than start your own?

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: trexrell44 on June 21, 2012, 11:33:51 AM

Without really messing with the integrity of your sprite I made a small edit.

(http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m219/trexrell/phoenx.png)

Title: Re: should i contiue?
Post by: HyperVoiceActing on June 21, 2012, 01:21:32 PM

Hair is better but the face really bothers me. I think it's the eyes, either too big or too angry