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Title: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 05, 2010, 06:56:26 PM
OK, here is Manic's Bombman with a little of my editing for a stance.. and I need peoples opinions on it. What needs to be changed or what doesn't look right. I really need criticism it would help soooooo much! TY :)
1.(http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/3477/crit.gif)
or
2.(http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/3477/crit.gif)
or
3.(http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/9586/bombman1.png)
or Manic's Original with a flipped bomb
4.(http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/8650/crit2.gif)
or Manic's Original with a little editing.
5.
(http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/9396/crit3.gif)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Jesuscroid on January 06, 2010, 05:59:16 PM
I don't know if I can give critism, the sprite itself looks excellent to me,
the 2 stances I like the most is 3 and 5
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: laspacho on January 06, 2010, 06:16:43 PM
I like Stance 3, that would be fitting.
All of these came out really nice. If it were me I wouldn't have him hold a bomb in his stance though, that would be a pain to put into every sprite.  Sprite 1 and 5 would make awesome attacks for Bombman.  I love how he is holding the bomb in sprite 1.   :thumbsup:
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: viteoz on January 06, 2010, 06:19:16 PM
 I like the number 3. ^^ :thumbsup:
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Danoartist on January 06, 2010, 07:46:04 PM
   They look cool, I would love to see a stance were he holds a bomb I think 1 was my first thought but if it isn't practical don't try it.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 06, 2010, 09:09:40 PM
Wow final some crit lol... but yeah I agree with laspacho it would be a pain in the butt to do every sprite with a bomb so I think 3 and the rest will be attacks or a start to a super or even hyper.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Rage on January 06, 2010, 10:12:55 PM
Wow final some crit lol... but yeah I agree with laspacho it would be a pain in the butt to do every sprite with a bomb so I think 3 and the rest will be attacks or a start to a super or even hyper.

Good Ideal, my wip Axl is a pain because of the gun is in every frame.  ~X(
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 06, 2010, 10:29:06 PM
Good Ideal, my wip Axl is a pain because of the gun is in every frame.  ~X(
Yeah, doing all the punch, kick and jump sprites would just be a hassle!  So I'm gunna take advice and not make my life a living hell.. lol
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Manic on January 06, 2010, 11:25:08 PM
(http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9586/bombman1.png)
Fixed up the shading a bit on your third sprite so that it isn't pillowed anymore. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: LunaG on January 06, 2010, 11:25:35 PM
But the original will always have more feel to it...
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 06, 2010, 11:37:09 PM
(http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9586/bombman1.png)
Fixed up the shading a bit on your third sprite so that it isn't pillowed anymore. :thumbsup:
TY Manic.. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: jurk on January 07, 2010, 04:45:16 AM
The pictures from 3 to 5 have some weird shadowing in the legs (for me at least). It seems like the leg on the left of the picture ison a farer plane

Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Acey on January 07, 2010, 10:17:29 AM
It looks good, my only thing is that Bombman is typically presenting a little pudgier in the midwaiste section.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 07, 2010, 02:20:15 PM
It looks good, my only thing is that Bombman is typically presenting a little pudgier in the midwaiste section.
Okay so a little more pudgy.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: G.P.O.A - GatlingPunchRalf on January 07, 2010, 03:03:31 PM
I like where this is going. I always did love his obsession with explosions.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 07, 2010, 03:22:41 PM
The pictures from 3 to 5 have some weird shadowing in the legs (for me at least). It seems like the leg on the left of the picture ison a farer plane


Okay, I get you h/o I will fix it.
EDIT:
Okay, how about this -
(http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/6499/bombmanstance1k.png)
He's pudgier or should he put on a few more pounds  ;*)) and Manic already fix the shading.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: SolidZone 26 on January 07, 2010, 06:14:02 PM
Yeah, I kinda agree with laspacho. I like the 3rd one too. Make him only carry a bomb when he's doing a special, not during his stance.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 07, 2010, 07:24:07 PM
Ok I need help I think this looks funny. -
(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2475/crit.png)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Rage on January 07, 2010, 07:26:49 PM
Ok I need help I think this looks funny. -
(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2475/crit.png)


wats wrong with it? it looks perfectly fine too me.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 07, 2010, 07:28:19 PM
wats wrong with it? it looks perfectly fine too me.
idk it just really looks funny, I just wanted a second opinion.
Maybe an Intro.. He comes in thinking he is tough and the bombs fall out from underneath him.. lol
(http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5580/crit2.png)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Jesuscroid on January 07, 2010, 10:51:51 PM
Ok I need help I think this looks funny. -
(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2475/crit.png)


3rd frame looks like he is fat (is that how BombMan is supposed to be?), and still in the 3rd frame, his face (or head) is just not right, try comparing it with the head from your standing frame and try to fix it
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Excursion on January 08, 2010, 02:49:19 AM
It looks good, my only thing is that Bombman is typically presenting a little pudgier in the midwaiste section.

I did an edit a while back that some remember. This was my take on Bombman:

(http://i27.tinypic.com/xkyhdd.png)

Based off this image:

(http://i28.tinypic.com/zjjg44.jpg)

From this thread (pg. 3):

http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=25649.30 (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=25649.30)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 08, 2010, 02:57:48 AM
I did an edit a while back that some remember. This was my take on Bombman:

(http://i27.tinypic.com/xkyhdd.png)

Based off this image:

(http://i28.tinypic.com/zjjg44.jpg)

From this thread (pg. 3):

http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=25649.30 (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=25649.30)
That's a awesome edit!!!!  @-)
So ISDK Should I make him bigger and then whats a good base? I know Megaman and Duo maybe?
There are these -
(http://pressthebuttons.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/2008/09/23/bombman.png)
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s1/Nemomon/Megaman/Characters%20Battle/Classic%20RockMan/Mega%20Man%201/006BombMan.gif)
(http://static.gamesradar.com/images/mb/GamesRadar/us/Games/M/Mega%20Man%209/Everything%20Else/Mega%20Man%20Week/Wallpapers/2008-07-01/img737--screenshot.jpg)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Excursion on January 08, 2010, 03:26:46 AM
Megaman, Power Battles Gutsman:

(http://i48.tinypic.com/2zi3m6g.gif)

and from scratch editing were my bases.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 08, 2010, 03:29:23 AM
Yeah that'll work.. I'll have the first sprite done on the morrow.
Thanx Excursion  :)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 08, 2010, 10:23:14 AM
I agree the bigger bombman looks better. I like the idea for the intro, that's awesome  :thumbsup:
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: G.P.O.A - GatlingPunchRalf on January 08, 2010, 11:22:29 AM
Maybe his ultimate special could be that he lights a hidden fuse on his back (because if I remember correctly, his midsection is actually an explosive device) and charges the opponent. If he connects with them, he explodes, and his upper body goes flying across the stage. The , a new set of legs could run across the stage, running over the opponent and he could put himself back together.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 08, 2010, 01:39:18 PM
Maybe his ultimate special could be that he lights a hidden fuse on his back (because if I remember correctly, his midsection is actually an explosive device) and charges the opponent. If he connects with them, he explodes, and his upper body goes flying across the stage. The , a new set of legs could run across the stage, running over the opponent and he could put himself back together.

that is really a cool idea & over the top. Awesome I love it for the vs style. his midsection does look like a bomb basically.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: G.P.O.A - GatlingPunchRalf on January 08, 2010, 01:44:42 PM
that is really a cool idea & over the top. Awesome I love it for the vs style. his midsection does look like a bomb basically.
I got the idea from the bomb-omb towers in a Mario game. A hammer koopa the midsection out with a hammer and another one took it's place.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: KudosForce on January 08, 2010, 02:13:29 PM
that is really a cool idea & over the top. Awesome I love it for the vs style. his midsection does look like a bomb basically.

I agree entirely. This hyper idea...It's so over the top that it's perfect! ;D

At any rate, I'm glad that someone is finally starting to do Bomb Man.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 08, 2010, 04:02:52 PM
I agree the bigger bombman looks better. I like the idea for the intro, that's awesome  :thumbsup:
The one where he falls lol yeah..
Maybe his ultimate special could be that he lights a hidden fuse on his back (because if I remember correctly, his midsection is actually an explosive device) and charges the opponent. If he connects with them, he explodes, and his upper body goes flying across the stage. The , a new set of legs could run across the stage, running over the opponent and he could put himself back together.
Okay Okay, sound good I'll see what I can work in there no promises though.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: zombiejerky on January 08, 2010, 04:39:50 PM
Try a 6 to 8 stance and have a range of animations for attacks
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: laspacho on January 08, 2010, 06:09:59 PM
The run looks great so far, and that is a awesome idea for a intro.  I like where your going with this, good job!

I like the "pudgier" look.   ;D
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 09, 2010, 03:04:51 AM
The run looks great so far, and that is a awesome idea for a intro.  I like where your going with this, good job!
Thanx.. coming from you that's a lot.
Okay using the base Excursion suggested  I came up with this -
(http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/7166/crityf.png)
and my friend wanted me to use this now as a look so what do you think? -
(http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9886/348c.jpg)
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Excursion on January 09, 2010, 03:15:07 AM
He looks good. He's a little disproportionate, maybe the no neck, hunch look makes it seem not right, maybe it's the hunch and arm placement of his right hand/arm, but if that is a stance sprite, then just touch and tweak it some more and I am sure you will have a winner there. 
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 09, 2010, 03:30:33 AM
He looks good. He's a little disproportionate, maybe the no neck, hunch look makes it seem not right, maybe it's the hunch and arm placement of his right hand/arm, but if that is a stance sprite, then just touch and tweak it some more and I am sure you will have a winner there. 
Are you talking about the first one cuz that's not the stance the second one is the first was just to use as a look at.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Excursion on January 09, 2010, 04:31:41 AM
Are you talking about the first one cuz that's not the stance the second one is the first was just to use as a look at.

I was talking about the 1st one you posted. This one:

(http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/7166/crityf.png)

The left hand is a little big.
Title: Re: MvC Bombman I need Crit
Post by: Esʞy on January 11, 2010, 03:52:07 AM
Okay, so I've decided it's best to work with what I got.. so sorry Excursion I'm not gunna make him that size but I'm gunna stick with the smaller one since I have much done already on it. The bigger version is taking to long and I can't seem to get it to work.. Maybe I'm not good enough yet but we'll see in the future. :thumbsup: Ummm I've also decided to edit Manic's a bit further into something like this -
(http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1481/crit4.png)
From the look of this Image -
(http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/6670/megamanbombmanart.png)
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