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Title: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 04, 2009, 07:02:58 PM
I never thought I would be posting a WIP, but here goes nothing. A couple days ago I ran across a nice spriting tutorial by Spidermew, and I sprited my first ever sprite (of Fireman from the Mega Man series), which I posted over in the Sprites Section. After that I tried spriting my first superhero, Red Tornado. My first attempt was posted on the Sprites section as well. Lets just say it didn't look as good as I thought it did, and I dropped it for another base, but still wanted to attempt the Red Tornado. So I went at it again, and came up with this:

(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/tornado003.png)

New Stance with Head portion of cape from DARKTALBAIN
(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/test.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 04, 2009, 07:25:15 PM
If you line up the sprites in the animation , he will look good .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 04, 2009, 08:39:20 PM
Thanks mate, I uploaded the wrong gif. I just uploaded the right one, now he looks like he should.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: dragonesku on January 04, 2009, 08:46:00 PM
That is excellent spriting work jlg6184.  :thumbsup:

Here, I think it looks better without all the white around it.

(http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b164/osergorp/redtornado_stance.gif)

Good luck with Red Tornado and don't hesitate to ask for help.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 04, 2009, 09:27:02 PM
Thanks for the compliment, and I am fairly sure I may have to ask for help at some point. Also, thanks for the no white background version, I went ahead and updated the first post with that one.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: dragonesku on January 04, 2009, 09:58:44 PM
Quote
Thanks for the compliment
Hey, you deserved it.  :)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Weapon x program on January 05, 2009, 11:47:50 AM
interesting, "we" may need to talk.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Jmaxximus on January 05, 2009, 02:02:13 PM
Reeaaal nice.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 02:26:22 PM
interesting, "we" may need to talk.
Ok, just shoot me a pm about what "we" may need to talk about.

Reeaaal nice.

Thanks mate!
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: BlkMoose on January 05, 2009, 02:29:31 PM
He looks amazing!!! :thumbsup:
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Alexziq on January 05, 2009, 04:58:27 PM
We have a Wip going on Reddy at the moment as Well, however the design is somewhat differant. Maybe we could colaborate efforts as I think it would be easier to edit our sprites than it would a base from scratch.

The only thing I dont like is that you have yellow gloves, and boots on which I think takes away from his look since Reddy has rarely ever worn standard boots or gloves. Ours looks like this

(http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j312/alexziq/4-2.png)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 05, 2009, 05:10:18 PM
alexziq does bring up a good point . He rarely had yellow gloves & boots . Just change them to red & put the lines on top .

Now as for his next idea . I would have to disagree . If you have a better edit with what you are working on . Why backtrack & try to fix something broken to make it almost as good as yours ?

I say keep spriting from whatever base you are using & don't play around with this . Because your stance looks great . Maybe use the coding from Red Tornado with added moves . But , 100% stick with your sprite style .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)       
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Spidermew on January 05, 2009, 05:13:59 PM
I actualy prefer jlg's look over jasons. It seems cleaner. No offence intended.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 05:21:32 PM
We have a Wip going on Reddy at the moment as Well, however the design is somewhat differant. Maybe we could colaborate efforts as I think it would be easier to edit our sprites than it would a base from scratch.

The only thing I dont like is that you have yellow gloves, and boots on which I think takes away from his look since Reddy has rarely ever worn standard boots or gloves. Ours looks like this


The reason I went for the yellow gloves and boots was I liked the look as I was basing my character off of this:
(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/red_tornado_small.png)


alexziq does bring up a good point . He rarely had yellow gloves & boots . Just change them to red & put the lines on top .

Now as for his next idea . I would have to disagree . If you have a better edit with what you are working on . Why backtrack & try to fix something broken to make it almost as good as yours ?

I say keep spriting from whatever base you are using & don't play around with this . Because your stance looks great . Maybe use the coding from Red Tornado with added moves . But , 100% stick with your sprite style .
     

Thanks for the vote of confidence on the stance and sprite style, I sincerely appreciate it.
 And as far as the boot/glove thing, I will resprite my main stance and see what everyone likes better, and go from there.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 07:11:26 PM
Alright, seeings how the the way the Red Tornado usually looks and the way I made him differ, I decided to try a compromise, you guys can decide which you like the best, then I will continue my spriting.

Option 1: My Original Style
(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/rtorn003cape.png)

Option 2: More like the Original Red T.
(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/rtorn003ALTcape.png)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: That Mugen Guy on January 05, 2009, 07:12:52 PM
#2
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: aquelegordo1 on January 05, 2009, 07:25:33 PM
2
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 05, 2009, 07:29:48 PM
#2

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: R.I.C.O - Twon on January 05, 2009, 07:43:59 PM
2
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: BlkMoose on January 05, 2009, 07:56:57 PM
I think option 2 show more of your sprites better....so i you should go with that one :-??
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: C.R.O.M. - 有且只有一個 on January 05, 2009, 07:59:03 PM
Its up to you after all it is your character....
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: dragonesku on January 05, 2009, 08:12:21 PM
# 1 has more a super hero vibe to me, but if you want to keep red tornado's character go with # 2, either way is good.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 08:24:41 PM
# 1 has more a super hero vibe to me, but if you want to keep red tornado's character go with # 2, either way is good.
I tend to agree on the super hero vibe, as evident by me going with gloves and boots originally, but I have to admit, after changing the boots/gloves, and the cape I kinda am leaning toward #2 as well. Also changing it let me see minute details that needed fixed which I am working on now. I just hope this character doesn't become too much for me to be able to do. 1 sprite at a time i guess. LOL.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 05, 2009, 08:32:06 PM
One thing you did forget is that part of the cape that comes around his head .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 08:43:01 PM
Actually I am working on that now, as the original picture I was using to go off of had him without the face part of the cape, So now I am just trying to figure out how to sprite it (not that easy for me). Also am reworking muscle structure as I felt too much of the original base was showing through.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Spidermew on January 05, 2009, 08:49:11 PM
you should make it so you can swich between the 2 with just a change of the palette.
You'd do that by making the extra yellow parts on the gloves and boots a weird color that isnt in the rest of him, like orange or green
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: R.I.C.O - Twon on January 05, 2009, 08:50:42 PM
you should make it so you can swich between the 2 with just a change of the palette.
You'd do that by making the extra yellow parts on the gloves and boots a weird color that isnt in the rest of him, like orange or green
Best Idea
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 05, 2009, 08:53:58 PM
you should make it so you can swich between the 2 with just a change of the palette.
You'd do that by making the extra yellow parts on the gloves and boots a weird color that isnt in the rest of him, like orange or green

I may try to work that in later, as for now I think I am just going to work on getting him sprited now that I have changed him from the original. I am working on updating the sprites I have completed. Also I have to go sprite hunting after I get the stance and basic stuff down because I don't think I am good enough to get the moves how I want them. But that is a bit down the road.

Here is the muscle redux:
(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/rtorn003ALTcapemuscleredux-1.png)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 05, 2009, 11:12:55 PM
Actually I am working on that now, as the original picture I was using to go off of had him without the face part of the cape, So now I am just trying to figure out how to sprite it (not that easy for me). Also am reworking muscle structure as I felt too much of the original base was showing through.

If you need help with that head thing as an example on a sprite , let me know . I have been making something similar on my Spawn WIP's for hundreds of sprites now .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: SPOOKY77 on January 05, 2009, 11:15:45 PM
Best Idea

I agree
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Alexziq on January 06, 2009, 12:13:32 AM
Well let me know of you want to full blown make him a WIP, like I said ours is already bald, and red. Seems like its silly to have 2 wips, but thats okay. Were pretty reliable to finish projects either way.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Weapon x program on January 06, 2009, 01:27:14 AM
these red tornado arent my sprites  :(, i just added the cape   >:D
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 06, 2009, 01:41:35 AM
these red tornado arent my sprites  :(, i just added the cape   >:D

So I take it you are working with ALEXIQ on the other Red Tornado project?
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 06, 2009, 02:20:33 AM
Now that I seen this up close & personal my opinion has changed on your sprites ....

They look even better than I first thought !

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/tornado1.png)

Maybe just add another shade of blue , so you can have more shading on the cape for when you see more of it on certain sprites you will be making . Kind of like you shaded the yellow & red . Nice job , man .


(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)

Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 06, 2009, 02:25:36 AM
Now that I seen this up close & personal my opinion has changed on your sprites ....

They look even better than I first thought !

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/tornado1.png)

Maybe just add another shade of blue , so you can have more shading on the cape for when you see more of it on certain sprites you will be making . Kind of like you shaded the yellow & red . Nice job , man .


(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)


Thanks man, I will post and updated version of the stance, and I am glad you liked everything once you seen it in more detail. I never expected to get this good of feedback! I will update all three with you additions, and will be sure to give proper credit where it is due.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: x_mad80 on January 06, 2009, 02:30:51 AM
more and more cool chars being created. can't wait to see the final product.  :O*D
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Dark Claw on January 06, 2009, 06:06:47 AM
i like what you are doing....but i think you should add more shadding to the legs...and add a little work on the head...but with that it will look impressive ^^
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 06, 2009, 12:07:15 PM
i like what you are doing....but i think you should add more shadding to the legs...and add a little work on the head...but with that it will look impressive ^^

I may try to reshade the legs, but I really don't see the need for it, and I will be leaving the head likely the way it is, as I really like the way it turned out, but thank you for your input.


Also, DARKTALBAIN was kind enough to extend the cape to come around Red T's head as it is in the comics, and I went ahead and updated my wip to include his contributions. I am still debating on including the connecting yellow lines that connects the yellow portion of his waste to that of his boots. (I must remember that I do have to sprite everything, LOL), I may also decide again the head portion of the cape has to go as well just to kind of stay true to the original designs I had, but time will tell what I choose to do. But here is the update with the head part of the cape *was also added to the first page of post*:

(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/test.gif)

EDIT: I will posted another animated stance on a transparent background as that one turned out pink...
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Jmaxximus on January 06, 2009, 01:22:41 PM
Looks Great to me keep up the good work.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 06, 2009, 02:34:42 PM
I may try to reshade the legs, but I really don't see the need for it, and I will be leaving the head likely the way it is, as I really like the way it turned out, but thank you for your input.


Also, DARKTALBAIN was kind enough to extend the cape to come around Red T's head as it is in the comics, and I went ahead and updated my wip to include his contributions. I am still debating on including the connecting yellow lines that connects the yellow portion of his waste to that of his boots. (I must remember that I do have to sprite everything, LOL), I may also decide again the head portion of the cape has to go as well just to kind of stay true to the original designs I had, but time will tell what I choose to do. But here is the update with the head part of the cape *was also added to the first page of post*:

(http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r24/jlg6184/test.gif)

EDIT: I will posted another animated stance on a transparent background as that one turned out pink...

Bro , this looks awesome .  Let me mention one thing to you . Yes I agree it is a pain spriting those extra details at times , especially when the character is moving . But you do seem to have a knack for it . The stance looks great & you even made the head piece move . Now I know from experience about details . Look at my Medieval Spawn WIP , chains , spikes , skulls , & capes . It's tough at times  . But you have a great thing here , go the extra mile & do all the details . It's the little added details that make the characters so much better .  :thumbsup:

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 06, 2009, 04:52:20 PM
Bro , this looks awesome .  Let me mention one thing to you . Yes I agree it is a pain spriting those extra details at times , especially when the character is moving . But you do seem to have a knack for it . The stance looks great & you even made the head piece move . Now I know from experience about details . Look at my Medieval Spawn WIP , chains , spikes , skulls , & capes . It's tough at times  . But you have a great thing here , go the extra mile & do all the details . It's the little added details that make the characters so much better .  :thumbsup:

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)

Thanks again, the reassurance goes a long way, let me tell you. I will work later at getting the yellow detail in, and see if I like it, trying to finish up the stances so I can move back on to spriting everything else. LOL
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Superjoker on January 06, 2009, 07:01:08 PM
cool work dude!

 %%- %%- %%- %%-

but i dont think androids need 2 breathe.

Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Spidermew on January 06, 2009, 07:04:21 PM
cool work dude!

 %%- %%- %%- %%-

but i dont think androids need 2 breathe.



Data from Star Trek:TNG had to breathe. It cooled off his electronics, like the fan in your computer cools the cpu.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 07, 2009, 12:45:41 AM
Data from Star Trek:TNG had to breathe. It cooled off his electronics, like the fan in your computer cools the cpu.


What he said... ^^(PM)^

But in all reality, there wasn't much for a stance you can really do with an android. It wasn't something I decided "oh well this android is going to breathe", it was more like, " his stance is gonna look like crap if he doesn't, and I am not wanting him to be a flying only character, so I was left with the breathing part, and any who, the Red Tornado did take on human alter ego appearance, so it isn't too far of a stretch that the breathing could be a sub-routine for his human alter ego appeance (needs to still look human)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Uche_of_IMT on January 07, 2009, 02:53:38 PM
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: The Anvil on January 07, 2009, 03:19:51 PM
Very good, it looks amazing, i agree with spidermew about the pallette!
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: dragonesku on January 07, 2009, 06:14:19 PM
The new stance looks great fellas, job well done. :thumbsup:
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Kojunho on January 08, 2009, 11:06:45 AM
Nice edit, but I never thought using MamboJambo's Green Lantern as a base would get so popular...
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 08, 2009, 11:13:19 AM
Nice edit, but I never thought using MamboJambo's Green Lantern as a base would get so popular...

MamboJambo made it open source . No harm , No foul .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 13, 2009, 10:41:35 AM
Update, after running into issues with the custom portions of the cape itself, I am updating my design to incorporate more of an existing cape templete (likely Doom's Cape, possibly Magnetos), and then will just tweak the cape, updated cape will be posted likely in the next day or so, also just an update, will begin spriting moves and such likely by the end of the week.

Main stance is finished minus the cape --
Crouching - Almost completed.
Walking - still having issues with the looks of the original bases and lining up (may have to frankensprite another walking base in to the mix to get it to line up properly.

I should be posting some animations coming up over the next week or two for feedback.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 13, 2009, 10:56:00 AM
This is disappointing news . That custom cape was very cool .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 13, 2009, 12:55:43 PM
I haven't made the decision yet. I have just stepped back and started spriting the body minus the cape, and am looking through the other capes. I may just update the cape so it is easier to work with on the other stances.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Weapon x program on January 13, 2009, 02:15:46 PM
did you receive the sprites i sent? ???
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 13, 2009, 03:21:55 PM
Alexiq sent me some sprites, but that is all I have recieved. So if the ones he sent are what you are talking about then yes, but if you sent some separate then no, I haven't received anything else.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Alexziq on January 13, 2009, 03:33:01 PM
Yeah, I exported all the sprites out of the Alpha, and sent them his way.


BTW JLG

Do you think he should fly? Your stance is awsome, but it would be cool if we gave him a flight mode with Tornado legs. I have some additional Sprites that may be useful, or we could just add a tornado effect around the legs during flight.

Thoughts?
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 13, 2009, 03:44:03 PM
Yeah, I exported all the sprites out of the Alpha, and sent them his way.


BTW JLG

Do you think he should fly? Your stance is awsome, but it would be cool if we gave him a flight mode with Tornado legs. I have some additional Sprites that may be useful, or we could just add a tornado effect around the legs during flight.

Thoughts?

Actually that is something that is on my list of things that I have planned out for him. I am in the process of getting/ripping sounds for him as well. As far as the flight, I haven't really decided how I am going to do it yet, but I do have some ideas in mind (not really going into them right now as some of them I am hoping to be a pleasant surprise for those who are looking forward to that character).
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Alexziq on January 13, 2009, 04:04:27 PM
Fair enough, I'll just let you do your character. If you need something for some reason, just hollar, and good luck :thumbsup:
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DoktorAvidan on January 14, 2009, 03:47:32 PM
Looks awesome!
I also figured Red was too underrated to ever be a WIP  =D>

And if that Glove/Band issue ever becomes a problem again, you could always make some palette separation.  :-??
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 15, 2009, 02:45:52 AM
Looks awesome!
I also figured Red was too underrated to ever be a WIP  =D>

And if that Glove/Band issue ever becomes a problem again, you could always make some palette separation.  :-??

I am not sure about the palette separation, I am just working on making sure the original colors line up first. Also the cape redesign didn't turn out as good as the original so changes will be minimal if at all. And as far as the underrated comment goes, well I feel that it is better to have one original character that not too many people want to work on then having 10 renditions of the same character (ie: Ryu, Ken, Geese, etc.)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: maniac71690 on January 15, 2009, 08:59:17 AM
and it's good to see people working on the less popular characters. Gives more variety and variety is definitely nice. Btw looking good. can't wait to see him when he's 100% finished.

And wouldn't worry about the pallette's so much. You can always update him later afterall if you choose to. Palettes or not Red Tornado is not a common character so seeing a working one is always cool.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on January 15, 2009, 10:52:46 AM
I am not sure about the palette separation, I am just working on making sure the original colors line up first. Also the cape redesign didn't turn out as good as the original so changes will be minimal if at all. And as far as the underrated comment goes, well I feel that it is better to have one original character that not too many people want to work on then having 10 renditions of the same character (ie: Ryu, Ken, Geese, etc.)

Agreed , I am pretty bored with all the super hyper orochi mega comboliscious akuma's being worked on .

(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 17, 2009, 08:30:25 AM
Update: Running into various issues with the base. I am still going to try to continue with the project, but I may end up having to go with another base as the Mambo base is giving me a lot of issues with the various stances as the colors aren't lining up very well. I am going to try to make the base work as I have been working with it for a few weeks now, but ultimately I may be forced to switch bases to continue working on the Red Tornado....
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Spidermew on January 17, 2009, 09:14:58 AM
Update: Running into various issues with the base. I am still going to try to continue with the project, but I may end up having to go with another base as the Mambo base is giving me a lot of issues with the various stances as the colors aren't lining up very well. I am going to try to make the base work as I have been working with it for a few weeks now, but ultimately I may be forced to switch bases to continue working on the Red Tornado....

Just mix bases. Urin from sf3 is close to the body type.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: jlg6184 on January 18, 2009, 02:17:31 AM
Checked out the Urien sprite packs, but he is vastly different than the mambo lantern. Cyclops is much closer, so I am going to try to keep working at this, but I probably won't update this again until I have the basics completed.
Title: Re: WIP: Red Tornado
Post by: Djoulz on January 30, 2009, 04:59:15 AM
never heard of this guy before..it sure looks awesome... good luck ;)
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