Carnage sprites in progress

[Sigfried]

Hi people my firt post in here
I wanna now what do you think of this.



This one need more work

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

they look greatI'im guessing twelve

[desgrav]

That looks awesome. Let me guess you used twelve as a base.

[BigJ]

super special awesome!

[god_king]

Hi people my firt post in here
I wanna now what do you think of this.



This one need more work

On the whole, it's a good design, but those tendrils extending outwards and then immediately retracting doesn't look so good. There's a couple of ways you could improve on this, to my way of thinking:

1) Don't have them all extrude and then retract at the same time. Stagger them, so that some come out at the same time that others are going back in, etc. It'll look more fluid that way, and Carnage should always be a fluidic sort of character.

2) Have some of them actually doing something while they're out; waving around and what-not.

3) Have some of them return to his body at different points than they came out of, so it's like an arc; again, this'll make it look more fluid, which is what the Carnage symbiote is all about.

Still, though, I think you've got a really good start on the character design, and the black sworls on him look exactly the way they ought to; you've really captured that element of the character design.

[PuReEvil0z]

this looks good, good luck, but one thing wasn't carnage thinner? less buff?

[Weapon x program]

the first sprite is amazing

[PsychoticMarik]

these are a really good start.Was hopeing for a new carnage someday but as for improvements i agree completely with god_king

[Lightblackheart]

clearly he used twelve

[Sigfried]

Yes, thanks all for the comments and sugestions,I only wanna now a few opinions,
anyway Im working in another thing right now, maybe in a future i will finish this  .

[Batandy]

Cool
Hi,
I am Batandy.

[Lightblackheart]

Cool
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I am Batandy.

 

welcome to the forum

[Draco]

looks very cool as a kid carnage or pocket carnage or something like that... 
pretty cool! 

[VICNOM]

nice work

[Batandy]

Thank you!

[Gore Whore]

looks cool but make him less buff but more ripped,  keep working on it, looks good 

[Bob Dobbs]

Yeah, that first sprite is awesome, but I agree... the tendrils need to be more active... even if they arn't doing anything.
I just finished re-reading Maximum Carnage and this was awesome to see. Good job.