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Title: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on March 19, 2009, 06:19:22 PM
well im sorry about the things in the other post, i didn't know that base are private, but now im goin to do for my own, and a little help of JASONTODD... thanks to him, i can start my own proyect...


well heres the sprites
(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00011cu0840.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00021pg91hj.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00031kd57wk.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00041rz20ak.png)

Stance(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/stance1fu21a3.gif)
Stand Hard Punch (http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/standing_hard_punch1pd27wr.gif)
Gigant Form (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8245/ultragigant.gif)

Portrit (http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5904/yellowjacket1.png)

i thank you all for support me... thank you again see ya
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: ANGELM on March 19, 2009, 06:24:14 PM
its all about permission and all. good sprites 8)
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 19, 2009, 07:03:25 PM
That forward leg , something just doesn't look right about it at the hip . You should touch that up a little .

Now as for the Wasp sprites . Just because you found them at an old forum & they seem abandoned . Doesn't mean you can use them . A creator somewhere still made those & could cause you problems using that later down the road . A lot of people just post sprites on other forums . For example , I seen some sprites that I posted here , on esnips . I didn't put them on there . Someone copied it from here & put them there . I'm still working on the character . See my point ?

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Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: ANGELM on March 19, 2009, 07:08:37 PM
to much detail is what you are trying to say? the forward leg is out a little?
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 19, 2009, 07:29:03 PM
to much detail is what you are trying to say? the forward leg is out a little?

No, it's not too much detail . It just doesn't lineup right with where the " underwear " line is . It's hard for me to explain this one .

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Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Spidermew on March 19, 2009, 07:30:01 PM
The left leg has allot more detale then the right leg. I would suggest making them match by altering the detales on the left to match the rest of his body. Or does he just inject steroids into that leg directly? lol

Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: ANGELM on March 19, 2009, 07:32:41 PM
The left leg has allot more detale then the right leg. I would suggest making them match by altering the detales on the left to match the rest of his body. Or does he just inject steroids into that leg directly? lol



steroids? then that would make his calf muscle bigger than the other one.lol
yea the left leg has more detail then the right. try balancing it a little bit.

No, it's not too much detail . It just doesn't lineup right with where the " underwear " line is . It's hard for me to explain this one .

yea it doesn't line up, work on that too. i get what you mean darktalbain.
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Genziroz on March 19, 2009, 07:34:23 PM
yes i see your point, and i dont gonna use this sprites, thanks again for your help
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: ANGELM on March 19, 2009, 07:45:02 PM
you have to give it something. always go over it and look zoom all the way out so you can get a good view of it. i'm not saying your sprites are bad, i'm just saying put effort into it.
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: HQ on March 19, 2009, 08:04:14 PM
that wasp sprite was made by LED..u better remove it or something like this happens  ::fight::

and just because someone makes an animation or an simple edit and not turning it into a char doesnt give you the right to use it for you char without asking ;)

anyways good luck ;)
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Z999 on March 19, 2009, 08:51:52 PM
Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me  :|) :

(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1655/pym.png)

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...


Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Genziroz on March 19, 2009, 09:01:38 PM
woa... you guys are amazing, how i can do it?????.. i only use paint, and i dont know how to do whit photo shop or paint pro, xD.... i need to learn how to do it xD.... well all of it is for yellowjacket xD... some day i will relase it xD
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 19, 2009, 09:11:03 PM
Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me  :|) :

(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1655/pym.png)

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...




Z does it again

I was going to fix it for him , but I was at work & just didn't have the time . good job , I figured you would be here soon anyway
lol

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Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Genziroz on March 19, 2009, 09:33:58 PM
mmm i think that i do it, but i only do it whit the old image(that made z) is the 2 sprite for the animation, moving shoulders or something
(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00011eo19ak.png)that made z
(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00021zc79zc.png) that make i
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Excursion on March 19, 2009, 09:36:03 PM
Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me  :|) :

(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1655/pym.png)

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

This is what I was trying to tell jason earlier about his shading technique.

(http://i43.tinypic.com/34e8g20.gif)
http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15 (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15)

Jason, really, practice adding/experimenting with extra colors/shades. Your edits seem a little flat or disproportionate sometimes. Yo have potential, you just have to practice to improve your skills.
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Spidermew on March 19, 2009, 10:04:17 PM
woa... you guys are amazing, how i can do it?????.. i only use paint, and i dont know how to do whit photo shop or paint pro, xD.... i need to learn how to do it xD.... well all of it is for yellowjacket xD... some day i will relase it xD

Gimp is free.
I use gimp, i have some videos in the tutoral section (look for the sticky "Sprite Editing the SpiderMew way")

http://gimp-win.sourceforge.net/old.html (http://gimp-win.sourceforge.net/old.html)
I use version 2.2, i like it better.
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Weapon x program on March 20, 2009, 03:16:48 AM
This is what I was trying to tell jason earlier about his shading technique.

(http://i43.tinypic.com/34e8g20.gif)
http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15 (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15)

Jason, really, practice adding/experimenting with extra colors/shades. Your edits seem a little flat or disproportionate sometimes. Yo have potential, you just have to practice to improve your skills.

you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: daraku on March 20, 2009, 05:06:00 AM
Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me  :|) :

(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1655/pym.png)

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

Wow i like this sprite :o
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: Excursion on March 20, 2009, 05:56:42 AM
you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.

There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism to improve your ten minute sprite editing skills. If you're taking that feedback personal then that's really a shame. :-??
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: KPT25 on March 20, 2009, 04:04:46 PM
you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.
dude,you took Ex's comment the wrong way...constructive criticism is what can make you improve your already good spriting skills jason.
I understamd how hard is to sprite edit,because i tried it myself once(and in paint,so imagine how it turned out ;*)))
Title: Re: hi again, now here is my work
Post by: danniel on March 20, 2009, 10:00:51 PM
prolly not used to it
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on March 25, 2009, 11:11:36 PM
new sprites
(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00011cu0840.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00021pg91hj.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00031kd57wk.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00041rz20ak.png)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: SPOOKY77 on March 25, 2009, 11:25:13 PM
he had 2 left hands in that third sprite LOL
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: That Mugen Guy on March 25, 2009, 11:27:19 PM
he had 2 left hands in that third sprite LOL

lol I didn't even notice that and its so obvious
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: .:K.I.N.G:. on March 25, 2009, 11:50:08 PM
nice
shading/lighting and arm muscles need some work.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Weapon x program on March 26, 2009, 03:11:48 AM
nice
shading/lighting and arm muscles need some work.
YES and the "real" left hand is way too big. cap 's arm.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Spawn on March 26, 2009, 08:20:55 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENXzR0l5Wms# (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENXzR0l5Wms#)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: daraku on March 26, 2009, 10:47:07 AM
No like the stance sorry :( I did this, i hope you like the new one ;D

(http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/7826/yellowjacket.gif) (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yellowjacket.gif)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 26, 2009, 01:27:06 PM
No like the stance sorry :( I did this, i hope you like the new one ;D

(http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/7826/yellowjacket.gif) (http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=yellowjacket.gif)


I'll tell you what the animations/motions look really good . ButI think his chest gets too big . It looks like it is about to explode .


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Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: volzzilla on March 26, 2009, 01:34:33 PM
Hank Pym has asthma, or didn't you know? lol j/k

I think it looks really good, but I guess DT has a point with the breathing. So other than that, as Billy Bob would say from the movie, 'Varsity Blues'...

"I give it a 10!..a 10 I tell ya, a TEEENNN!!"


Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: daraku on March 26, 2009, 02:04:23 PM
I'll tell you what the animations/motions look really good . ButI think his chest gets too big . It looks like it is about to explode .


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Yea, you are right...but little time to make it good, and i didn't knew if it will be another abandoned wip, so if it turn into a full chars i'll fix it
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on March 26, 2009, 10:04:49 PM
dont worry about that... im really going to realize this proyect.... if you want to help i really apreciate... thanks for posting... but i have a question...... i have to post new replies or i can put the new sprites in the first post????
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 26, 2009, 10:09:13 PM
dont worry about that... im really going to realize this proyect.... if you want to help i really apreciate... thanks for posting... but i have a question...... i have to post new replies or i can put the new sprites in the first post????


Do it how you want to , it's your WIP thread . Some people do both

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Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on March 26, 2009, 10:38:58 PM
can i ask you guys a favor??????
i cant do the palet, anybody could help me?????
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on March 26, 2009, 11:02:37 PM
can i ask you guys a favor??????
i cant do the palet, anybody could help me?????

What colors did you want him to be ?

In reality , I usually save palettes for last on my charcters .

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Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on March 29, 2009, 03:10:21 PM
Stance(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/stance1fu21a3.gif)
Stand Hard Punch (http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/standing_hard_punch1pd27wr.gif)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: ANGELM on March 29, 2009, 03:11:25 PM
the hard punch looks like a rocket punch from sentinel.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Weapon x program on March 29, 2009, 03:36:10 PM
and always a left hand  (:|
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Spidermew on March 29, 2009, 09:36:29 PM
Why is his off-hand twitching like that?
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: MuηkyMØÜf on March 29, 2009, 11:09:40 PM
 /:O wow, i just wiki'd this guy and ive never heard of YellowJacket or The Wasp! So, i wouldnt know what to expect of him either. Nice looking sprites tho.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: volzzilla on March 29, 2009, 11:15:10 PM
Yellowjacket is one of the core Avengers, he just did not get the same publicity as the others.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Drattak7 on April 01, 2009, 07:08:01 AM
He seems at an early stage of developpment, but it's cool! You should make a Hyper where he grows out of the screen and walks on the enemy and punches him with his Giant fist! Just some ideas flowin' through my head ^-^
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: BlizzardTora on April 05, 2009, 07:45:22 PM
Just do ur best. Even if you can only finish the sprites themselves i'm sure someone could touch them up.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: ZVitor on April 05, 2009, 08:11:29 PM
the hard punch looks like a rocket punch from sentinel.
lol
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on April 15, 2009, 08:42:51 PM
hi... well here the gigant form..... sorry for the color missing, Gigant Form (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8245/ultragigant.gif)

tell me what do you thing.... is edited for Apocalipsis....
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: BlizzardTora on April 15, 2009, 08:49:52 PM
at least its not a edit of jax's foot from his fatality.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: volzzilla on April 15, 2009, 09:24:13 PM
idea is awesome, could use a little polish, but i like where your going.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on April 16, 2009, 12:53:12 AM
hi... well here the gigant form..... sorry for the color missing, Gigant Form (http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8245/ultragigant.gif)

tell me what do you thing.... is edited for Apocalipsis....

Honestly ...

his head needs a lot of work

the shading for some reason looks grainy now on the black parts

the gloves & everything should be re edited so he doesn't look robotic

It's tough shading big sprites . To tell you the truth I still haven't mastered it at all

So , good luck on this  %%-
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: danniel on April 16, 2009, 02:14:54 AM
Quote
.. is edited for Apocalipsis..
oh shiz really!
 o.O# here i was thinking you edited from megaman
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Weapon x program on April 16, 2009, 03:26:22 PM
oh shiz really!
 o.O# here i was thinking you edited from megaman
please, it s anita  :D
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on April 16, 2009, 07:29:52 PM
lOl xD
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on May 27, 2009, 02:12:43 PM
hi guys.... well i need some help.... I have tried, and tried and tried... and i cant... xD
i need someone could help me and transform my apocalipsed gigant yellowjacket to a really yellowjacket.... i hope you could help me in it....

i have avanced in my work... but i dont have time to post it.... coming soon new updates....

here is my sprites for gigant form.....


http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/694/pym0014.png (http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/694/pym0014.png)


thanks and good bye
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: KudosForce on May 28, 2009, 05:23:01 PM
new sprites
(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00011cu0840.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00021pg91hj.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00031kd57wk.png)(http://www.imaxenes.com/imagenes/pym00041rz20ak.png)

Not bad, but the sprites need to have MvC proportions, less shading and more detail and polish.

Here's a screenshot from the Wonderman release party topic (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=23150.0 (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=23150.0)) to show you what I am talking about:

(http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/9450/lancamento.png)

I'm looking forward to his eventual release, though. ;)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on May 28, 2009, 06:17:30 PM
mmmm i see your point... but see how it look in game.... i think he's ok in comparison whit other marvel heroes...

look
(http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/899/yellowjacketff.png)

see ya
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: KudosForce on May 28, 2009, 06:32:02 PM
Well, I suppose you're right. :-?? You still need to work on the shading and bright colors, though.
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on May 28, 2009, 07:14:31 PM
hi again... here i post some ideas for hits.... i dont know if i use it or not but is only an idea... here is

(http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/1699/patadacable.gif)
(http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/830/masazocyclops.gif)

hope you like it.... and help me if you can
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: ZVitor on May 28, 2009, 08:28:29 PM
nice bases....
dont worry about giant form, not yet....
finish walk, gethits... the most boring parts and then members will start offer help....

ps: why your captain is named genziroz?
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on May 28, 2009, 08:31:36 PM
xD......is also for fun xD... is my nickname xD....


PS. can someone make a avatar for forum... i dont know how to make it xD.... whit the stance sprite and named Yellowjacket or Noldor... hope you can

see ya
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on June 02, 2009, 12:49:49 PM
hi again... here is my portrait... Marvel Vs Dc Style.... for my Yellowjacket char.....
(http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5904/yellowjacket1.png)

coming new Atacks and maybe Guard stance
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Ref Cortez on June 02, 2009, 12:58:12 PM
looks great. . . keep it up
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: tremainekr on June 02, 2009, 08:50:52 PM
wow i looked yellow jacet up on wikipedia.....he a complete phsyco

he was origanaly Ant man. who could shrink himself and contol ants.with his helmet.

went crazy and fought the avengers

created the robot ultron which killed the avengers

he invented some pills that make him a giant..he came back as giant man..then back again as golitah.

then in 2009..he is wasp with wings on his back.

annnnndddd he always carried a gun lol
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: juelz aka wolfi on June 02, 2009, 09:03:46 PM
 :O*D carry on im interested
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Genziroz on June 02, 2009, 10:47:48 PM
wow i looked yellow jacet up on wikipedia.....he a complete phsyco

he was origanaly Ant man. who could shrink himself and contol ants.with his helmet.

went crazy and fought the avengers

created the robot ultron which killed the avengers

he invented some pills that make him a giant..he came back as giant man..then back again as golitah.

then in 2009..he is wasp with wings on his back.

annnnndddd he always carried a gun lol



the gun is of Cable MvC.... and is only an idea, based in cable only for the kick... i dosent edited it already

see ya
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: tremainekr on June 04, 2009, 12:09:10 AM
no really check his bio.. he really had some kind of super gun
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: yosifun on June 04, 2009, 02:11:51 AM
He looks really nice, the stance is great

BTW, you should make the "wings" round like the sprite in the Wonderman stage (and comics of course).

Good luck %%-
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: tremainekr on July 02, 2009, 08:40:39 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_wr9YT-ISRc# (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_wr9YT-ISRc#)
Title: Re: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket
Post by: Tha Lando ( Le CROM ) on July 02, 2009, 09:32:47 PM
your character is great man! just a lil touching up in details is about it but only thing i seen a lil awkward was his right arm. doesnt look as detailed in musculiture as the left one does even tho its in a different pose. thats it by my eyes anyway. keep up the good work and hope you finish him so me and my son can play as him and take him for a test drive. lol good luck.
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