Post by: andersontavars on February 05, 2009, 03:18:27 PM
(http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3593/gif1na3.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: Alexziq on February 05, 2009, 03:21:21 PM
Post by: Weapon x program on February 05, 2009, 04:18:56 PM
good start and good luck ::salute::
Post by: SPOOKY77 on February 05, 2009, 04:22:48 PM
FIRST SPRITES are gonna the things you will redo over and over with time, ask batzarro ^-^
good start and good luck ::salute::
That's very true...the first sprite I ever did was Dr Strange and trust me it looked NOTHING like the WIP I have now LOL...keep making everything better and good luck :)
Post by: ATiC3 on February 05, 2009, 04:32:13 PM
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 05, 2009, 04:54:24 PM
Medieval Spawn has been changed at least 5 times .
Wolvenom never changed yet :thumbsup:
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: andersontavars on February 05, 2009, 05:21:02 PM
I have 12 different version of Hobgoblin sprites . I can release variants .
Medieval Spawn has been changed at least 5 times .
Wolvenom never changed yet :thumbsup:
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
I am grateful for the honesty, really need help, I do not have much experience, some are based on the woman sprinter wonder yes, thank you all for believing, once again sorry for bad english! :)
Post by: guy-zero32k4 on February 05, 2009, 08:58:18 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c#noexternalembed (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c#noexternalembed)
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 05, 2009, 11:24:16 PM
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: andersontavars on February 06, 2009, 12:51:37 AM
I think original Loganir?
I am awaiting response from Loganir, as it is only 1% of char, thanks for your post Darktalbain :thumbsup:
Post by: Weapon x program on February 06, 2009, 01:08:24 AM
Post by: amarillo002 on February 06, 2009, 01:15:47 AM
about your sprite...she looks good...just need some final touches on the hair and the gloves (there is still visible the division of the bracelets of WW)...im general is a good first work :D
Post by: andersontavars on February 06, 2009, 01:24:45 AM
you are gonna wait a lot :D
O yes, while still working at the end did not answer girl power turns personal project.
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 06, 2009, 10:38:22 AM
I am awaiting response from Loganir, as it is only 1% of char, thanks for your post Darktalbain :thumbsup:
Yeah bro , Loganir kind of retired from mugen . Even when he was around , it was very hard to contact him . His scruffy box was always full , so you couldn't even send a message . The email at his site , he never answered . I ended up catching him at the DC Universe site , I think . But that site doesn't exist anymore .
I would suggest finding another base , so you don't waste time working on sprites you may never be able to use .
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: andersontavars on February 06, 2009, 10:55:53 AM
Loganir hasn't show his face in a loooooooog time buddy...maybe you could try another base (or bases) there are a lot of girls...morrigan, psylock, rogue, chun-li.... just to name someones...
about your sprite...she looks good...just need some final touches on the hair and the gloves (there is still visible the division of the bracelets of WW)...im general is a good first work :D
I have some trouble with hands and hair, I find it very difficult, but I am doing some tests here and even creating sprinter own, thanks to all and remember:
"not Booby Girl, I'm POWERGIRL DAMMIT!":
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c#noexternalembed (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c#noexternalembed)
hauhauahuahauhauhauaha :thumbsup:
Post by: Acey on February 06, 2009, 09:13:17 PM
Making Mugen characters is alot of work, I think we can save you alot of trouble right now with this information so you can continue the art without problems.
Post by: DizzyTheConquer on February 06, 2009, 09:23:36 PM
Post by: Kojunho on February 06, 2009, 10:12:47 PM
Post by: andersontavars on February 06, 2009, 10:25:04 PM
Nice start but everybody's right about the base. Loganir isn't gonna answer to your e-mail. Like they said, use psylocke or rogue; or better yet, how about characters from other games that don't deal with marvel.
Well, I really understand, really my biggest enemy is just a little experience, I am doing other sprints on other chars but also some originals, put the new in little time, thanks for the help and criticism and praise. Sorry for my english. :)
Post by: daraku on February 07, 2009, 04:01:54 AM
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 07, 2009, 08:43:49 AM
In my opinion you can use Loganir sprite cause he is not active anymore. if him come back to the mugen scene, then you can leave credit to him... the old sprite of WonderWoman are opensource by the moment he decided to leave the mugen
It doesn't quite work that way . He hasn't been gone 2 years for one thing & there are exceptions to every rule about the whole leaving mugen . I don't think Loganir's work will ever be open source . Look at what the guy did when he was in mugen . Do you really feel his works should just be open source ? A lot of people including myself , would have to disagree with you on this , if you think so .
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: deadmangunner on February 07, 2009, 08:57:42 AM
Post by: andersontavars on February 07, 2009, 01:07:09 PM
Well, I really understand, really my biggest enemy is just a little experience, I am doing other sprints on other chars but also some originals, put the new in little time, thanks for the help and criticism and praise. Sorry for my english. :)
I put some more pictures I hope you like it, I need some ideas for special moves. I'm doing now based on sprints of the Psylocke and rouge, for now is that, grateful to all. sorry for English.
(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/2761/figura1ox3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1198/figura2ex3.th.jpg) (http://img27.imageshack.us/my.php?image=figura2ex3.jpg)
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 07, 2009, 01:56:16 PM
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: amarillo002 on February 07, 2009, 03:49:12 PM
Post by: Alexziq on February 07, 2009, 04:29:24 PM
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 07, 2009, 07:32:31 PM
Just wait some day some will get hit with a cease and desist then maybe the community will get a taste of how it feels to be called thief by its true definition.
Then we will all probably become the mugen underground & still create characters in secret forums ;*))
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: andersontavars on February 07, 2009, 10:26:30 PM
Very good , can't wait to see the new sprites
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
HI guys, this is a new standard gif of Power girl! Thanks for all .
(http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4819/gifnovagk0.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: alex87 on February 08, 2009, 03:19:12 AM
Post by: andersontavars on February 08, 2009, 05:44:14 AM
Elektra??? ??? :|
pernas of the psylocke, body edited, gloves elecktra and rogue hair edtt <_<|...|
Post by: deadmangunner on February 08, 2009, 12:24:39 PM
Post by: BlkMoose on February 08, 2009, 03:58:51 PM
Post by: DARKTALBAIN on February 08, 2009, 04:13:28 PM
Did you use the gloves from Buyog's Elektra ?
You can't do that , bro . The way the rules of the mugen community go is you can only use things from Capcom , SNK , or other sprites of major companies . You can't take peices / parts from any mugen creators character without their permission .
Believe me I am not trying to give you a hard time . I am just trying to save you some grief in the long run
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
Post by: Deathzarus on February 08, 2009, 04:43:52 PM
gd luck on the wip
Post by: Superjoker on February 08, 2009, 08:53:09 PM
here u go man, try this
http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Uploads/KONG/MvC2/MVC2_PsyLock_Sprite.7z.zip (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Uploads/KONG/MvC2/MVC2_PsyLock_Sprite.7z.zip)
good luck
Post by: andersontavars on February 08, 2009, 10:54:30 PM
Here we go again .....
Did you use the gloves from Buyog's Elektra ?
You can't do that , bro . The way the rules of the mugen community go is you can only use things from Capcom , SNK , or other sprites of major companies . You can't take peices / parts from any mugen creators character without their permission .
Believe me I am not trying to give you a hard time . I am just trying to save you some grief in the long run
(http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa64/DARKTALBAIN/MedSpawn2.gif)
I say that the left hand is provisional, but I'm sure that this left hand is free of another char that when I do not remember, and I have several parts loose here, respect the work of other designers, the problem was cut parts and mix - them, I'm working on hipers at the moment, but I will soon post another base without sprints protected, thanks for everything and see you soon.
Post by: ATiC3 on February 09, 2009, 02:41:11 PM
Post by: andersontavars on February 09, 2009, 04:23:50 PM
here u go man, try this
http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Uploads/KONG/MvC2/MVC2_PsyLock_Sprite.7z.zip (http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Uploads/KONG/MvC2/MVC2_PsyLock_Sprite.7z.zip)
good luck
Hi man, ty for sprints, but i have this, look others image for Power Girl and coment, :w00t:
(http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4791/imagehackyc9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/3007/imagehack2bz8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: aquelegordo1 on February 09, 2009, 08:54:45 PM
Post by: andersontavars on February 11, 2009, 06:32:26 AM
Hi guys, this is my first WIP, that at the beginning yet, but expect criticism and suggestions, grateful to all and sorry for my English. :w00t:
(http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3593/gif1na3.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Hi guys this a new stand to crouch! the Power Girl = 10% :)
(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9772/gifnova2ik4.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: andersontavars on February 12, 2009, 06:45:16 AM
Hi guys, this is my first WIP, that at the beginning yet, but expect criticism and suggestions, grateful to all and sorry for my English. :w00t:
(http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3593/gif1na3.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
HI guys, first video for Power Girl, i will work in intros now. :w00t:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTDjtPxOfl8#noexternalembed (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PTDjtPxOfl8#noexternalembed)
Post by: ATiC3 on February 13, 2009, 08:01:24 PM
Looking very good, but I don't understand something else... like.. why is the first sprite in that new animation having her arms up like that... looks kinda weird... if there is ever a block to crouch animation made.. that would go good for that... that's what it looks like she's doing..
Post by: andersontavars on February 17, 2009, 12:24:58 AM
Very nice. The only thing I see wrong with the sprites is the detail in the hair.. but you can adjust that later... doesn't have to be now... lol...
Looking very good, but I don't understand something else... like.. why is the first sprite in that new animation having her arms up like that... looks kinda weird... if there is ever a block to crouch animation made.. that would go good for that... that's what it looks like she's doing..
Hi Atice, i then ask for help with the hair because I have great difficulty with the hair, there is another group ready, the 20 and 21! Thanks for the post.
(http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/8382/gifnova3rp9.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: ATiC3 on February 17, 2009, 01:25:02 AM
Hi Atice, i then ask for help with the hair because I have great difficulty with the hair, there is another group ready, the 20 and 21! Thanks for the post.Um... I was only commenting.. I'm actually not great with spriting hair.. I probably have the same problem you do.. always wanting to make it look perfect, but it never f'n does...
(http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/8382/gifnova3rp9.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: andersontavars on February 19, 2009, 07:27:11 PM
Hi Atice, i then ask for help with the hair because I have great difficulty with the hair, there is another group ready, the 20 and 21! Thanks for the post.
(http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/8382/gifnova3rp9.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Sorry for the delay, been working hard these days and could not continue with the sprints, I started a group of scam, started by the group 400, again indicated that the hair will finally, at the end of all the sprints, Goodbye to all .
(http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7919/gifnova4wq7.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
Post by: volzzilla on February 25, 2009, 05:54:35 PM
Post by: andersontavars on February 26, 2009, 11:31:14 PM
Um... I was only commenting.. I'm actually not great with spriting hair.. I probably have the same problem you do.. always wanting to make it look perfect, but it never f'n does...
Helo guys, I had to make a stop here because the carnaval in Brazil, but I am returning soon with new features, see you soon! ;D
Post by: andersontavars on March 01, 2009, 06:14:44 PM
Helo guys, I had to make a stop here because the carnaval in Brazil, but I am returning soon with new features, see you soon! ;D
New frames, in jump now!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZsD5ZEBo8o#hq (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YZsD5ZEBo8o#hq)
Post by: andersontavars on March 29, 2009, 01:11:47 PM
Hi guys, this is my first WIP, that at the beginning yet, but expect criticism and suggestions, grateful to all and sorry for my English. :w00t:
(http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3593/gif1na3.gif) (http://imageshack.us)
I had to take a break due to work, but came back to work in our Powergirl, put a picture of Heart vision, as always with some difficulties, but I will improve little by little, sorry for the pause in my project.(http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6372/powergirlheartvision.th.jpg) (http://img155.imageshack.us/my.php?image=powergirlheartvision.jpg)
:)
Post by: volzzilla on March 29, 2009, 01:19:14 PM
We all just wish you luck with everything :)
Post by: Technology on March 29, 2009, 01:38:36 PM
Good job.
Post by: andersontavars on March 31, 2009, 01:02:16 AM
No need to apologize life comes first and everyone realizes that, so don't worry about it :)
We all just wish you luck with everything :)
Hi Volzzilla,
Celebrating the return to work, one of the introductions of Power Girl, based on this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c# (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QZgj8UyNN9c#)
. just an idea, but this Bizzaro this so horrible that I am ashamed :-?? :-??, consider a beta of this idea. I await comments and suggestions. Bye everyone. :) :) :)
(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2226/gifnova5introg.gif) (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova5introg.gif)
(http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/gifnova5introg.gif/1/w320.png) (http://g.imageshack.us/img23/gifnova5introg.gif/1/)
Post by: volzzilla on March 31, 2009, 01:07:28 AM
Post by: andersontavars on April 01, 2009, 01:21:56 AM
Buyog might be convinced to all use of his official bizarro for the intro you have in mind....i'll ask him for you.
Hi guys, The Power Girl in 50%, look she walk now, Thanks fo infinity mugen team and all members.
(http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/658/gifnova6walk.gif) (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova6walk.gif)
Post by: Alexziq on April 02, 2009, 11:04:19 AM
Buyog might be convinced to all use of his official bizarro for the intro you have in mind....i'll ask him for you.
I dont think the sprites are to par that he'd be all that keen about it. Prehaps down the road as things progress, and improve.
Post by: volzzilla on April 02, 2009, 06:08:13 PM
Post by: andersontavars on April 02, 2009, 08:09:23 PM
anderson, you know i've been a big supporter of yours thus far, but i gotta say not digging that walk at all. seems stiff and unnatural, both in the upper body and lower body.
Thanks for saying good friend, I will make some adjustments. Soon the news post. :) :)
Post by: andersontavars on April 06, 2009, 01:48:45 AM
Thanks for saying good friend, I will make some adjustments. Soon the news post. :) :)
I await comments, new hair and movement of the upper body in the group 20th I will be working in the shadows of the legs soon. :)
(http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6055/gifnova7walk.gif) (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova7walk.gif)
Post by: Xx5DollarBillxX on April 06, 2009, 01:51:08 AM
Post by: volzzilla on April 06, 2009, 09:12:48 AM
The upper body movement is better, but I'd have to see it again when some alterations to the lower body are made to really comment.
I say this because something just looks wrong in the hips still. Maybe turn her hips a little more towards the direction she is walking and give a more traditional walk? I'm not sure, people with more experience in Mugen could probably answer all that better than me.
As for who she is, she is Supergirl, but a little older from an alternative universe who got transported to the main DC universe.
Post by: BlizzardTora on April 10, 2009, 03:53:04 PM
Post by: andersontavars on April 11, 2009, 11:00:41 PM
It might be the MVC style rogue legs. they're bigger than they need to be so all the proportions are off.
I will improve the image of this group soon, I will add more details in the legs and in proportion, a hug to everyone. :w00t:
image of the hiper 2(http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9271/gifnova8hiper.gif) (http://img25.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova8hiper.gif)
Post by: volzzilla on April 11, 2009, 11:15:11 PM
and i look forward to see what you have in store for the updated look.
Post by: andersontavars on April 17, 2009, 12:22:52 AM
looks promising :)
and i look forward to see what you have in store for the updated look.
Hi guys look grups 430, 440, 450, :) :) <_<|...| <_<|...|
(http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/4673/gifnova9lightkickcrouch.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova9lightkickcrouch.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/5875/gifnova10mediumkickcrou.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova10mediumkickcrou.gif) (http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/3945/gifnova11hardkickcrouch.gif) (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova11hardkickcrouch.gif)
Post by: BlizzardTora on April 19, 2009, 05:27:39 AM
(http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y13/GrieverZero/DC/pgbustyt2.jpg)
Perfect!
Post by: daraku on April 19, 2009, 09:18:43 AM
Hi guys look grups 430, 440, 450, :) :) <_<|...| <_<|...|
(http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/4673/gifnova9lightkickcrouch.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova9lightkickcrouch.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/5875/gifnova10mediumkickcrou.gif) (http://img2.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova10mediumkickcrou.gif) (http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/3945/gifnova11hardkickcrouch.gif) (http://img8.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova11hardkickcrouch.gif)
I don't want offend you, but the sprites need much shading... and now them are a bit ugly in comparison with other Power Girl Sprites :P
Post by: andersontavars on April 19, 2009, 06:50:27 PM
I don't want offend you, but the sprites need much shading... and now them are a bit ugly in comparison with other Power Girl Sprites :P
Thanks for the post, the images will improve soon, thank you not only praise but also the criticism, since only thus improved. sorry for my bad English.
Post by: Z999 on April 20, 2009, 12:05:59 AM
- Same color for the skin and costume outline should be avoided. Just use a darker color of what you outline.
- the shading is kind of flat, try to add more colors of the same shade (especially on the skin).
- breast is a lil squared in my opinion
- different haircut depending of the sprites
- belt position tends to be jumby, i suggest just making it run on the hips.
I made a quick sprite again to follow my thoughts, again not meant for any kind of direspect or anything, just to show you :
(http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/705/gifnovagk0copie.png)
Hope this can help in a way or another ^^
Post by: andersontavars on April 20, 2009, 01:04:33 AM
Some feedback :
- Same color for the skin and leg outline should be avoided. Just use a darker color of what you outline.
- the shading is kind of flat, try to add more colors of the same shade (especially on the skin).
- breast is a lil squared in my opinion
- different haircut depending of the sprites
- belt position tends to be jumby, i suggest just making it run on the hips.
I made a quick sprite again to follow my thoughts, again not meant for any kind of direspect or anything, just to show you :
(http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/705/gifnovagk0copie.png)
Hope this can help in a way or another ^^
^:)^ ^^(PM)^ ^:)^
Will help and much thanks to all, learn a little every day, as said earlier, there is still much to learn here and in infinitymugenteam know that I will learn a lot, thanks again. :) :)
Post by: Slayer on April 20, 2009, 01:14:22 AM
I Like This Animation.
I will improve the image of this group soon, I will add more details in the legs and in proportion, a hug to everyone
:w00t:
image of the hiper 2(http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9271/gifnova8hiper.gif) (http://img25.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gifnova8hiper.gif)
Post by: Z999 on April 20, 2009, 01:20:35 AM
One other thig i wanted to add, you should avoid spriting the effect directly over the char, it will look way better if you add these separatly trust me.
Post by: daraku on April 20, 2009, 11:29:20 AM
(http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/6055/gifnova7walk.gif)I like the hair alot, it looks realy good.
The upper body movement is better, but I'd have to see it again when some alterations to the lower body are made to really comment.
I say this because something just looks wrong in the hips still. Maybe turn her hips a little more towards the direction she is walking and give a more traditional walk? I'm not sure, people with more experience in Mugen could probably answer all that better than me.
As for who she is, she is Supergirl, but a little older from an alternative universe who got transported to the main DC universe.
I suggest a fly walking... and not a real walking
Post by: Eclipse on April 20, 2009, 12:22:23 PM
Post by: andersontavars on April 20, 2009, 11:35:17 PM
Looking good!! Used Elektra for the base?
No man, i used Psylocke and angel and more chars, :)
Post by: Gate on April 20, 2009, 11:36:41 PM
Post by: andersontavars on April 21, 2009, 01:01:18 AM
Eclipse was saying to Z666 edit :D
Ops, sorry <_<|...|
Post by: Z999 on April 21, 2009, 08:41:11 AM
Hum no, only used andersontavars power girl stance that was posted at the end of page 2 for reference and redraw starting from here (since the goal was showing ways to improve his edits, not to change them).
Post by: Eddmug on June 16, 2009, 02:00:14 AM
Post by: criok on July 01, 2009, 06:33:11 PM
very godd. ^:)^ ^:)^ ^:)^ ^:)^ =D> =D> =D> =D> :)
Post by: A New Challenger on July 01, 2009, 07:10:40 PM
You're lacking fundamentals in animation, shading, and even general details of the character's appearance - were you to 'finish' and then try to 'make it look better' you'd be talking a complete overhaul of every sprite. It'd take less time to do things proper in the first place.
This isn't a dig man, but what you've got isn't PG. Z's edit is a great deal closer; study that, make a few single frame edits in a more appropriate style, and try a nice smooth animation for something simple like a jab - then you can start claiming she's a WIP. Hopefully, you'll learn to walk before you try to run.
Good luck.
Post by: Alexziq on July 03, 2009, 01:55:26 AM
Don't take this the wrong way, but things like this are why people need to learn to edit before they start 'WIPs.'
You're lacking fundamentals in animation, shading, and even general details of the character's appearance - were you to 'finish' and then try to 'make it look better' you'd be talking a complete overhaul of every sprite. It'd take less time to do things proper in the first place.
This isn't a dig man, but what you've got isn't PG. Z's edit is a great deal closer; study that, make a few single frame edits in a more appropriate style, and try a nice smooth animation for something simple like a jab - then you can start claiming she's a WIP. Hopefully, you'll learn to walk before you try to run.
Good luck.
Some people enjoy trying.
Post by: A New Challenger on July 03, 2009, 06:55:24 AM
Some people enjoy trying.
I agree completely. Everyone should try to a sprite edit or two, before they up and WIP something and ultimately get nowhere fast. Learning to edit is a lot of fun. Glad we're on the same page.
Post by: Superjoker on July 03, 2009, 11:18:45 PM
Don't take this the wrong way, but things like this are why people need to learn to edit before they start 'WIPs.'
You're lacking fundamentals in animation, shading, and even general details of the character's appearance - were you to 'finish' and then try to 'make it look better' you'd be talking a complete overhaul of every sprite. It'd take less time to do things proper in the first place.
This isn't a dig man, but what you've got isn't PG. Z's edit is a great deal closer; study that, make a few single frame edits in a more appropriate style, and try a nice smooth animation for something simple like a jab - then you can start claiming she's a WIP. Hopefully, you'll learn to walk before you try to run.
Good luck.
WTF????
lol ANC there are no rules to wipin, anderson go nuts man, the more you practice the better you get (not just in mugen).
ANC instead of constantly being a critic show us your 'smooth animations' and maybe some more examples of 'appropriate style', practice and share what you preach.
btw that was not a dig man, hope you dont take it the wrong way.
good luck anderson!
:O*D %%-
Post by: andersontavars on July 04, 2009, 01:56:39 AM
WTF????
lol ANC there are no rules to wipin, anderson go nuts man, the more you practice the better you get (not just in mugen).
ANC instead of constantly being a critic show us your 'smooth animations' and maybe some more examples of 'appropriate style', practice and share what you preach.
btw that was not a dig man, hope you dont take it the wrong way.
good luck anderson!
:O*D %%-
Well I'm back as my beloved Power Girl. I am reviewing some sprints, This is the new base. Thanks for recent posts, were that they encouraged me to resume this work. this new base was based on the post of our friend Z999, he posted an edit that I liked very much. Soon the new friends.
(http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/9666/gil0.gif) (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/gil0.gif/)
Post by: Alexziq on July 04, 2009, 08:50:29 AM
Post by: .Batzarro. on July 04, 2009, 08:57:12 AM
Post by: A New Challenger on July 04, 2009, 12:42:29 PM
ANC instead of constantly being a critic show us your 'smooth animations' and maybe some more examples of 'appropriate style', practice and share what you preach.
As far as designs go, we tear each other down alot at the unlimited to reach a better design. Often, you're not gonna hit a perfect design on the first try. What really helps is merging - taking a few versions and reaching something that's both more wip-able and accurate.
Here's an example with my old take on Karen against a concurrent one with elements worked in from Taskmaster0 and AngelEcks:
(http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/6806/peej.gif)
The second version corrected the shading a bit, fixed the piping on her costume, and gave her a more realistic bottom base for potential WIPing. We improved from there, although Peej is always one that we never got going full-steam on. Note that Capcom shading is top-lit, with great contrast between the lightest and darkest shades, but gradual contrast in the middles.
As far as animations go, three frames in which you've cut and pasted body parts shifting don't animate well. Try to either meet or exceed the number of frames Capcom uses. Here's Flash's jab. It's an easy example, modeled over cyclops. The torso and legs were redrawn over the originals, but the basic movement is borrowed.
(http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7035/oner.gif)
A more elaborate example is this crouching MP for Aaron Stack. He's a bit of a secret side project of mine, but since you asked so politely to see examples of my work, let's take a look:
(http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/8598/crouchmp.gif)
This one was more along the lines of Acey's excellent scratched animations tutorial. I borrowed a non-animated chainsaw from eco-warriors, and modified Nero Chao's crouching parry frame into a full animation. Nero isn't perfectly capcom shaded himself, so I tweaked the contrast in the colors on his jacket, and drew in a custom torso more fitting to Capcom style. Top lighting is key - even for scratch stuff, you can use a popular base like Cyke or Cable to see what the shading should look like.
Anyway, always happy to help a new spriter like yourself, Super_Joker. Good luck!
Post by: andersontavars on July 05, 2009, 01:29:57 AM
The new design is a big step in the right direction. You might want to reference some comics for her hair, boots, and face, but overall, pretty sharp.
As far as designs go, we tear each other down alot at the unlimited to reach a better design. Often, you're not gonna hit a perfect design on the first try. What really helps is merging - taking a few versions and reaching something that's both more wip-able and accurate.
Here's an example with my old take on Karen against a concurrent one with elements worked in from Taskmaster0 and AngelEcks:
(http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/6806/peej.gif)
The second version corrected the shading a bit, fixed the piping on her costume, and gave her a more realistic bottom base for potential WIPing. We improved from there, although Peej is always one that we never got going full-steam on. Note that Capcom shading is top-lit, with great contrast between the lightest and darkest shades, but gradual contrast in the middles.
As far as animations go, three frames in which you've cut and pasted body parts shifting don't animate well. Try to either meet or exceed the number of frames Capcom uses. Here's Flash's jab. It's an easy example, modeled over cyclops. The torso and legs were redrawn over the originals, but the basic movement is borrowed.
(http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7035/oner.gif)
A more elaborate example is this crouching MP for Aaron Stack. He's a bit of a secret side project of mine, but since you asked so politely to see examples of my work, let's take a look:
(http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/8598/crouchmp.gif)
This one was more along the lines of Acey's excellent scratched animations tutorial. I borrowed a non-animated chainsaw from eco-warriors, and modified Nero Chao's crouching parry frame into a full animation. Nero isn't perfectly capcom shaded himself, so I tweaked the contrast in the colors on his jacket, and drew in a custom torso more fitting to Capcom style. Top lighting is key - even for scratch stuff, you can use a popular base like Cyke or Cable to see what the shading should look like.
Anyway, always happy to help a new spriter like yourself, Super_Joker. Good luck!
Great edits friend, one day come to perfection, but with time, while I appreciate the help of all, this is a gif of the group 100. See you soon.
(http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/4784/gil1.gif) (http://img162.imageshack.us/i/gil1.gif/)
Post by: Superjoker on July 05, 2009, 08:14:24 PM
very talented work, the sprites i have trouble with are those transition sprites that make the object or limb seem like a flash movement.
Post by: Z999 on July 06, 2009, 04:40:18 PM
Keep it up and i'm sure that she'll continu to look better and better ^^
Post by: andersontavars on July 07, 2009, 11:32:04 AM
Hey nice improvement Andersontavars, glad to see you didn't give up on her.
Keep it up and i'm sure that she'll continu to look better and better ^^
Hello friends, seeing the face of the final Powergirl, look the hair, It was good? See you soon! :)
(http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6963/gil2.gif) (http://img198.imageshack.us/i/gil2.gif/)
Post Merge: July 08, 2009, 10:44:32 AM
thanks ANC
very talented work, the sprites i have trouble with are those transition sprites that make the object or limb seem like a flash movement.
This is a new walk for back
(http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8665/gil4.gif) (http://img37.imageshack.us/i/gil4.gif/)
Post by: BLue BoMBeR on July 08, 2009, 10:47:42 AM
Quote
(http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/8665/gil4.gif) (http://img37.imageshack.us/i/gil4.gif/)
Post by: andersontavars on July 11, 2009, 12:52:17 PM
ok cool, but the right arm looks differrent
Ty for coment friend, this a new image:
(http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/9905/gil5.gif) (http://img44.imageshack.us/i/gil5.gif/)
Post by: BlizzardTora on July 11, 2009, 02:26:45 PM
Post by: daraku on July 11, 2009, 04:58:15 PM
Ty for coment friend, this a new image:
(http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/9905/gil5.gif) (http://img44.imageshack.us/i/gil5.gif/)
Wow the sprite now are beautiful...but try to change a bit the skin tone
Post by: andersontavars on July 15, 2009, 12:18:52 PM
Nice edit very good... ^^
Ty for all coments, this is a little up, the face, this teh group of the beam hyper!
(http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3654/gil6.gif) (http://img362.imageshack.us/i/gil6.gif/)
(http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/5939/gil7.gif) (http://img397.imageshack.us/i/gil7.gif/)